Writing Ideal Home

My ideal home is a modern house in Los Angeles. It's really big, and it has got a lot of things and rooms: It's got four big bedrooms, and three bathrooms, a modern kitchen, a enormous living room and a great garden. Next to the big garden there's a pool only for me and a jacuzzi too.

On an ideal afternoon in my ideal home we're all here. My sister is playing on the computer.  And my fathers are looking for the views of the sea. I'm in the living room that there's a cinema scream with a lot of DVD's and some computer games. In the middle there's another jacuzzi and behind it a big sofa. In the floor there's a expensive carpet too.